This is the kind of error primary school children make when they are  
just beginning to write longer sentences and stories.   They're  
excited about writing, not very good at it and definitely do not edit  
their writing.

I suspect it is mostly an editing concern.

Katharine/Kindergarten/N.California



> 'In the first passage by Elizabeth Wong talks about her childhood  
> being
> taken from her and replaced by schooling.'
>
> 'In the article, "A Dangerous Fat and Its Risky Alternatives" by  
> Michael
> Mason, talks about the chances we take when eating at a restaurant.'
>
> 'In the article "A Dangerous Fat and Its Risky Alternatives," by  
> Michael
> Mason, gives us information about restaurants and their hazards, but
> says they don't compare to the danger of trans fats in partially
> hydrogenated vegetable oils.'
>
> 'As the article entitled "Don't Judge Me by My Tights" written by  
> Sascha
> Radetsky emphasizes importance of stepping outside your comfort zone.'

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"Believing there is no God gives me more room for belief in family,  
people, love, truth, beauty, sex, Jell-o, and all the other things I  
can prove and that make this life the best life I will ever have." -  
Penn Jillette

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