Sorry about the misattribution.  It was, of course, Bruce's analysis I was agreeing with.

 

Herb



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	Christine,

	 

	It is hard to disagree with Herb.  One little observation, however.  I think something needs to be said about the possibility that "what" in an exclamative is a modifier of the article.  I am more comfortable with the exclamative being a full NP.  This would make "what a paradox" parallel to "many a paradox."  The full form would be "What a paradox (it is)!" rather than "What (is) a paradox" (! for ?) or "What a paradox (is is)," which both seem vapid at best.  (These last two involve the so-called headless relative, which I prefer to call the indefinite noun clause.)  

	 

	Bruce

	 

	>>> [log in to unmask] 8/5/2004 8:21:13 AM >>>

	

	Christine,

	

	I like your second version.  The problem with the first is that it makes a difference what the subject of "is" is, to paraphrase a well-known Rhodes Scholar.  Grammatically, the sujbect has to be "a paradox", and what's within commas is an appositive.  However, "a paradox" is also the complement of "what" in an exclamatory sentence.  Exclamations beginning with wh-words typically lack verbs, just "what" + NP.  So "a paradox" is being asked to play to grammatical roles at once, something that doesn't usually work well.  The reader is tempted to make "the Internet" the subject, but then the sentence becomes a comma splice.

	

	Herb

	

	

	

	    Dear Group, 

	

	    How should this be punctuated? 

	

	    What a paradox, the Internet, the very cutting edge of communication 

	    technology, is creating an anti-social society. 

	

	    What a paradox! The Internet, the very cutting edge of communication 

	    technology, is creating an anti-social society. 

	

	    Christine Martin 

	

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