John, The website looks interesting and is fun to play around in, but you should know that the following sentence is NOT correct (your "English Game" says it is correct): "Digging in the garden, a brooch was found." The sentence contains a 'dangling modifier' -- who exactly IS digging in the garden? This sentence suggests it was a brooch, which could only be true in a magical situation. The correct sentence in this part of the game should have been: "The girls marched around the oval, dressed in pretty frocks." Keep on plugging! Paul E. Doniger ----- Original Message ----- From: john kinny-lewis <[log in to unmask]> To: <[log in to unmask]> Sent: Wednesday, July 25, 2001 8:53 PM Subject: Webclass > Hi, > > My name is John Kinny-Lewis. > > I have just launched a new version of my old site. > > The address is http://www.webclass.asn.au > > It is an educational site which includes english grammar. > > Any feedback would be appreciated, particularly 'typos'. > > Cheers, > > John > > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface at: > http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html > and select "Join or leave the list" > > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or leave the list" Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/