Well, he darn well BETTER be impressed! I'm glad you are coming Friday. Unfortunately, we will be in G'ville Friday aftenoon through Sat. afternoon visiting the Knights. We are long overdue for a visit to their house. They are good about coming here, so we owe them. HOORAY for the exercise regimen! You looked great last time I saw you--it really is paying off. Once you get hooked on feeling better and LOOKING great, you really have crossed over to the "other side." 5:30. That's impressive. Take care, Love, Nancy ----- Original Message ----- From: Craig Hancock <[log in to unmask]> Date: Wednesday, March 9, 2005 9:58 am Subject: Re: Go camping > Thanks sis!!! What would I do without you - I will make these > changes after school and send it back to you. I emailed it to > Billy. When I talked with him last night I could tell he was quite > impressed with my accomplishments! I'm looking forward to seeing > him Friday night. I hope to see you all on Saturday, if things > aren't too crazy for you. I'll leave Saturday afternoon to come > back but it would be great to see you all. Give everyone my love. > I got up AGAIN at 5:30 to excercise - 1 hour of the FIRM......I > have truly crossed over to the "other side". Have a good day - > talk to you later! > > Judy > > Nancy Tuten <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > v\:* {behavior:url(#default#VML);}o\:* > {behavior:url(#default#VML);}w\:* {behavior:url(#default#VML);}.shape {behavior:url(#default#VML);}st1\:*{behavior:url(#default#ieooui) } > I had a read-only version, so instead of making the changes, I?m > telling you what they are so YOU can make them on your copy: > > > > (1) Lowercase ?staff? in the list under Hospice. > > > > (2) Add an ?s? to ?program? in the list under Faith > > > > (3) Also at Faith, change ?youth? to ?youth group.? > Technically, ?youth? is singular and ?youths? is plural. If you > like ?youths? better than ?youth groups,? that works, too. > > > > Question: Under Mt. Zion, you say that you ?developed and > expanded? confirmation program. ?Developed? suggests to me that > you created it. But how could you have expanded it if there wasn?t > one? You might want to clarify?either say one or the other or > somehow explain how you did both. Or?it just hit me?maybe you > meant ?Developed AN expanded confirmation program.? I?m still not > sure you need both words ?developed? and ?expanded.? > > > > Other: > > (1) I just noticed that you say on p. 2 that you ?organized > mission trips for youths at various parishes,? but you have > already mentioned mission trips at Faith. If you organized mission > trips at other congregations as well, maybe you should list > something else under Faith and strengthen the item under ?other? > by saying something like ?organized mission trips for youth groups > at four [or whatever number] congregations.? > > > > (2) Now that I?m looking at it, the ?References? line at the > end seems a bit odd because it?s not highlighted, in larger font, > or anything to set it apart from the list right above it (except > that it?s missing a bullet). (I know, I know?that?s what I TOLD > you to do. Sorry. Now that I see it, it looks funny.) Play around > with it: maybe boldface it and center it. Maybe put another line > of space between it and the list above it. Maybe boldface it and > make it slightly larger (but NOT as large as the headings). See > what you think. > > > > (3) I just noticed that there are two missing words??of? and > ?the???in the line ?Served as president OF THE Catawba Valley > Ministerial Association? > > > > (4) You need commas before the dates in those two last items > in the ?other? list on p. 2: ?Catawba Valley Ministerial > Association, 1994? and ?counselor at Lutheridge, 1984-97 > > > > I think that does it! I really like to look at these things after > I haven?t been so close to the document for at least a day. Can > you give it 24 hours and look at it again? It?s amazing what > you?ll see after a significant break. > > > > It?s really strong! Who wouldn?t hire you!? > > > > Nancy L. Tuten, PhD > > Professor of English > > Director of the Writing-across-the-Curriculum Program > > Columbia College > > Columbia, South Carolina > > [log in to unmask] > > 803-786-3706 > > > --------------------------------- > > > From: Judy Lewis Copeland [[log in to unmask]] > Sent: Tuesday, March 08, 2005 10:01 PM > To: Nancy Tuten > Subject: RE: > > > > > Sorry!!!!!! > > Nancy Tuten <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > You sent me the same one I sent younot the one we revised while we > were talking on the phone. This one doesn t have some of the > corrections we made. > > > > Nancy L. Tuten, PhD > > Professor of English > > Director of the Writing-across-the-Curriculum Program > > Columbia College > > Columbia, South Carolina > > [log in to unmask] > > 803-786-3706 > > > --------------------------------- > > > > From: Judy Lewis Copeland [[log in to unmask]] > Sent: Tuesday, March 08, 2005 9:50 PM > To: Nancy Tuten > Subject: > > > > > Here it is.... > > > > __________________________________________________ > Do You Yahoo!? > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around > http://mail.yahoo.com > > > > __________________________________________________ > Do You Yahoo!? > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around > http://mail.yahoo.com > > > __________________________________________________ > Do You Yahoo!? > Tired of spam? Yahoo! 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