Since Brad found Hemingway to be a poor role model, I decided to look at E.B. White, author (with Will Strunk) of “Elements of Style” and arguably one of the premier stylists in the language. The essay, chosen since I’m teaching it in a few weeks, is “Once More to the Lake,” which has been anthologized numerous times in best essay collections. I found twenty-three past perfect verb phrases in an essay of moderate length. I was actually surprised that I did not find more, but most of those that do show up are used to great effect. To those of you who don’t know the essay, it’s about going back with his son to a lake he had visited as a child with his father. He is struck by how little everything has changed, and he begins to feel like his son is himself and he is his father. I find it rich and moving, perhaps because I made annual visits to a lake in Maine with my family as a child. I taught it last year, though, and found most students, even my urban students, liked and admired it. I don't want to defend every use of the past perfect, but we should at least begin with an acknowledgement that it has a functional role within discourse. Here are some of the sentences, not a full list, but an attempt at a representative one. “I took along my son, who had never had any fresh water up his nose and who had seen lily pads only from train windows.” “The lake had never been what you would call a wild lake.” “But when I got back there, with my boy, and we settled into the kind of summertime I had known, I could tell that it was going to be pretty much the same as it had been before--…” “It was the arrival of this fly that convinced me beyond any doubt that everything was as it always had been, that the years were a mirage and that there had been no years.” “It seemed to me, as I kept remembering all this, that those times and those summers had been infinitely precious and worth saving. There had been jollity and peace and goodness. The arriving (at the beginning of August) had been so big a business in itself….” “Inside, all was just as it had always been, except there was more Coca-Cola and not so much Moxie and root beer and birch beer and sarsaparilla.” “It was like the revival of an old melodrama that I had seen long ago with childish awe.” “He pulled his dripping trunks from the line where they had hung all through the shower and wrung them out.” To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or leave the list" Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/