>Michael, My apologies if I made you feel in trouble. It was a thoughtful post, and I thought highly enough of it to invite more development. Welcome to the talk. Craig Morning everyone > > I might have predicted that my very first ATEG post would get me into > trouble. So cool to find some colleagues who actually care about such > things! > > Unfortunately, Dick, I cannot yet cite an authority for you. Indeed two > of my own favorite authorities, Foerster & Steadman, in Writing and > Thinking, suggest that my usage is appropriate "only in informal, > colloquial discourse" though they seem to waver on that principle > elsewhere in W&T. F&S call this sentence, "He, as well as his friends, > was present" right but awkward. I suspect they'd use the same > classification for the S&W sentence. Though without those commas, it > strikes me that "as well as" means simply "and." > > I'll forward the question to one of my teachers, Lynn Troyka. Maybe we > can get some consensus from her. > > BTW, Craig, I offered up "objective" a bit prematurely. I'm still > working out that theory, but I'll get back to you. > > Michael > > > -------------- Original message from "Veit, Richard" <[log in to unmask]>: > -------------- > > > Michael, > > You are saying that you disagree with Strunk and White (quoted by Carol > below). Are there equivalent authorities you can cite? I am not saying > “authorities” are ipso facto right (for example, you can still find > textbooks that pronounce it ungrammatical to end a sentence with a > preposition), but in matters like this there is often an agreed upon > consensus. > > Dick > > > > > From: Assembly for the Teaching of English Grammar > [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Michael Keith Pen Ultimate > Rare Books > Sent: Sunday, June 15, 2008 11:30 PM > To: [log in to unmask] > Subject: Re: a subject-verb-agreement question > > Dick et al > > Ask yourself why "his speech as well as his manners is objectionable" > doesn't sound right. In that sentence I suspect that "as well as his > manners" serves as a delayed, emphatic additional subject--something akin > to: also especially his manners!--and is therefore and thereby plural. > Remember, if the subject is plural, the verb should be as well. Many > subjects succeeded by "as well as" are intended indeed to be singular. > The subject/example you provided, in most contexts, emphatically is NOT. > Grammar, like language and concepts, is contextual and objective. > > Michael > -------------- Original message from "Veit, Richard" <[log in to unmask]>: > -------------- > Thanks, Carol. That is most helpful. Is it is. I knew that intellectually > but wish it sounded right too. For example, change “manner” to “manners” > in the Strunk and White example and it doesn’t seem as clear cut: "His > speech as well as his manners is objectionable." > > Dick Veit > > > > > From: Assembly for the Teaching of English Grammar > [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Carol Morrison > Sent: Sunday, June 15, 2008 4:11 PM > To: [log in to unmask] > Subject: Re: a subject-verb-agreement question > > According to Strunk and White in The Elements of Style, "[a] singular > subject remains singular even if other nouns are connected to it by with, > as well as, in addition to, except, together with, and no less than (21). > So I believe that your last example would take the verb "is". Strunk and > White give the following example: "His speech as well as his manner is > objectionable" (21). > I'm not sure if the comma between "society at large" and "as well as" > changes that in your sentence though. > > --- On Sun, 6/15/08, Veit, Richard <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > From: Veit, Richard <[log in to unmask]> > Subject: a subject-verb-agreement question > To: [log in to unmask] > Date: Sunday, June 15, 2008, 3:32 PM > A little help, please, with subject/verb agreement in a sentence. These I > have no trouble with: > > Good policy will come when society at large is educated about HPV. > Good policy will come when at-risk individuals are educated about HPV. > Good policy will come when society at large and at-risk individuals are > educated about HPV. > > And pretty sure about this: > > Good policy will come when society at large (not just at-risk individuals) > is educated about HPV. > > But what about this one? > > Good policy will come when society at large, as well as at-risk > individuals, is/are educated about HPV. > > Do the commas make the second phrase an aside so that the verb should > agree with “society” only (i.e., “is”)? Or do we treat “as well as” as > equivalent to “and,” making “are” the right choice? I seek your informed > guidance on the matter. Any specific reference to authority is especially > welcome. > > Dick > ________________________________ > Richard Veit > Department of English > University of North Carolina Wilmington > > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface > at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or > leave the list" > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > > > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface > at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or > leave the list" > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface > at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or > leave the list" > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface > at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or > leave the list" > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ To join or leave this LISTSERV > list, please visit the list's web interface at: > http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or leave > the list" > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface > at: > http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html > and select "Join or leave the list" > > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or leave the list" Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/