Ah! I almost forgot! I was going to give you some suggestions for texts that you may want to check out! General Texts with Grammar Sections- *Language Exploration and Awareness*: *A Resource Book for Teachers *Andrews, Larry *Language Alive in the Classroom* Wheeler, Rebecca (Ed.) *Linguistics for Teachers* Cleary, L. M. & Linn, M. D. (Eds.) (I particularly like this one!) *How English Works: A Linguistic Introduction, *Curzan, A. & Adams, M. *An Introduction to Language, *Fromkin, Rodman, & Hyams (a classic intro) *Understanding Language Structure, Interaction, and Variation: An Introduction to Applied Linguistics and Sociolinguistics for Nonspecialists*, Brown, S. & Attardo, S. (I have some objections to this text overall, but it has good applications for teachers as well as a workbook.) *Relevant Linguistics: An Introduction to the Structure and Use of English for Teachers*, Justice, P. W. Grammar Texts- *Grammar Today: The New American Language and Grammar Primer, *Betting, R. *Grammar Alive! A Guide for Teachers*, Haussamen and ATEG Members *English Grammar for Writing*, Honegger, M. *A Communicative Grammar of English, *Leech, G. & Svartvik, J. *Introducing English Grammar*, Borjars, K. & Burridge, K. *Understanding English Grammar*, Kolln, M. These are just a few that I've found effective. Richard Betting's text (Richard is a member of this list I believe) is a newer one that I particularly like. Hope these help! John Alexander Austin, Texas On Tue, Dec 9, 2008 at 2:34 PM, Natalie Gerber <[log in to unmask]>wrote: > Edmond, > > Yes, the virtues are apparent for all the reasons you say, and I will make > use of this model. Again, thanks. But am I alone in finding that my > college-level students are unable to identify parts of speech, let alone > phrasal and syntactic structures? I ask in all seriousness because in > January I will teach, for only the second time, a grammar course "for > everyone" but especially for future teachers of English. My expectations > were completely dashed the first time through. Is the kind of remarkable > attention and methodology you describe here in wide use? > > I'd also be grateful to you and everyone else for recommendations on a good > grammar book to use. I used Longman in conjunction with a Diana Hacker book > (and handouts from Artful Sentences) last time to give an overview of > descriptive and prescriptive approaches, but I found working with the two > texts difficult. I'm considering Graeme Kennedy's Structure and Meaning in > English, and I've requested a review copy of the new book discussed on this > listserv about a week ago. Any other suggestions? > > Natalie > > > ________________________________ > > From: Assembly for the Teaching of English Grammar on behalf of Edmond > Wright > Sent: Tue 12/9/2008 2:54 PM > To: [log in to unmask] > Subject: Re: Graphic Syntax > > > > > Natalie, > > The great advantage of the Christensen method is that one can introduce it > by stages over the years. For example, 7th graders can manage both > sentence > combining and analysis of repeated noun clusters, and of present participle > phrases; one can get them used to two levels of dependence. And thus one > can introduce past participle phrases and preposition phrases at the next > stage. Clauses and absolutes can come in at the ninth grade, and so on, > increasing the possible levels of dependence as one goes. > > Edmond > > > > > > > Edmond, > > > > Thank you for pointing out a valuable resource, which is indeed new to > me. I > > look forward to reading it. I don't believe this method will describe all > > free-verse, perhaps I should say, organic-verse or experimental poets, > since > > they strain against syntactic groupings, but it certainly goes far toward > > making precise judgments possible, and describes much free-verse poetry. > You > > may already know this, but I thought I'd mention that the groupings you > > identify below are also relevant to generative metrical accounts of poems > > written in meter. Placement of the caesura in relation to complete, or > > athwart, syntactic entities is one way of creating cola and rhythmical > > complexity within conventional metrical verse. I believe Bruce Hayes has > done > > interesting work with this in relation to several meters. > > > > May I ask at what level are the students with whom you use this method? > > > > Natalie > > > > > > > > > > ________________________________ > > > > From: Assembly for the Teaching of English Grammar on behalf of Edmond > Wright > > Sent: Sun 12/7/2008 8:35 AM > > To: [log in to unmask] > > Subject: Re: Graphic Syntax > > > > > > > > As regards 'graphic syntax' no one seems to have noticed that they are > > trying to do what Francis Christensen demonstrated (pages 9-13 of his > 'Notes > > Toward a New Rhetoric' [New York, Harper & Row, 1967]) -- as I described > in > > my email of a few days ago, and which I use with my students. According > to > > his method, Carolyn Harnett's sentence ought to appear thus: > > > > 1 Poets . . . chunk their poems > > 2 who write in traditional forms . . . (RC) > > 3 based on metre and rhyme (VC) > > but 3 in a different way from graphic syntax (PP) > > 4 which chunks . . . (RC) > > 5 based on grammatical units (VC) > > > > RC: Relative Clause > > VC: Verb Cluster > > PP: Prepositional Phrase > > > > I prefer to split 'Verb Clusters' into Past Participle Phrase (as both > the > > examples here), Present Participle Phrase, and Infinitive Phrase; > > Christensen lumps them all together. > > > > Christensen's numbers indicate the hierarchy of grammatical dependence. > > Hence my suggestion for students of drawing vertical lines down the page > to > > correspond. > > > > His other suggested groupings are as follows: > > > > SC: Subordinate Clause. This is an confusion, since Relative Clauses > [his > > RC] are subordinate clauses. He already has > > > > NC for Noun Cluster. Again possibly confusing, since it looks like Noun > > Clause. He uses it for such extensions of meaning as 'a quick shake' in > the > > sentence 'He dipped his hands in the bichloride solution and shook them, > a > > quick shake.' > > > > AC: Adjective Cluster (e.g. for the two phrases attached here: 'They > > huddled, wild as deer, deadly as rattlesnakes.') > > > > A + A: Adjective series (e.g. For the three adjectives here: 'They > > huddled, gaudy, motionless and alert.') > > > > Abs: Absolute Phrase (e.g. for the two phrases attached here: He stood > at > > the top of the stairs and watched me, I waiting for him to call me up, he > > hesitating to come down.') > > > > > > I prefer the following: > > > > ADJP (Adjective Phrase) for both his AC and A + A. > > > > NP for Noun Phrase (e.g. the noun phrase in apposition, 'an expert > swimmer' > > in 'The scout, an expert swimmer, was soon across the lake.' > > > > ADVC for Adverbial Clause. > > > > ADJC for Adjectival Clause. > > > > ADJ PREP for Adjectival Prepositional Phrase (e.g. 'in the white suit' in > > 'The man in the white suit.' > > > > ADV PREP for Adverbial Prepositional Phrase (e.g. 'over the bridge' in > 'The > > procession was filing over the bridge'). > > > > ABS for Absolute Phrase (e.g. 'He stopped at the corner, the rain lashing > at > > the windscreen.') > > > > ING for Present Participle Phrases (e.g. The rooks, cawing in comical > > surprise, rose clumsily into the air.') > > > > ED for Past Participle Phrases (this included the strong verbs which do > not > > use 'ed' to indicate the past participle -- e.g. 'thrown out of the car' > in > > 'The gun, thrown out of the car, had disappeared into the grass.'). > > > > > > When I reverse the process in sentence combining (for all these can be > used > > to indicate to students how to combine), I also include 'HYPH' for the > > collapsing of a sentence into a hyphenated word. For example: > > > > The child delighted them all. > > The child loved fun. (HYPH) > > > > Becomes 'The fun-loving child delighted them all.' > > > > One is helped by the fact that many distinguished writers enjoy creating > new > > hyphenated words from such combining. For example: > > > > [Gerard Manley Hopkins] 'Some of the pigeons are dull thunder-colour or > > black-grape-colour.' > > > > [James Joyce] 'Suddenly the dog made off like a bounding hare, ears flung > > back, chasing the shadow of a low-skimming gull.' > > > > [Shakespeare] '. . .who knows > > If the scarce-bearded Caesar have not sent > > His powerful mandate to you.' > > > > [William Barnes] 'and the sheep, little-kneed, with a quick-dipped nod' > > > > Hopkins, Barnes -- and Barnes' friend, Thomas Hardy -- were all > > unconsciously aware that the Anglo-Saxon words of English have rarely > been > > hyphenated (compare the cognate German language, full of such compounds), > > and they started to look for original linkages. This can still provide an > > amusing exercise for students: for example, instead of words of Latin > > origin, suggest Anglo-Saxon substitutes, thus -- for OEcollision¹ a > two-bang; > > OEauction¹ a step-buy; OEfrustration¹ foot-bind-hood; OEdentist¹, > > tooth-soother; OEvaccinate¹, cow-sting. > > > > > > Edmond Wright > > > > > > Dr. Edmond Wright > > 3 Boathouse Court > > Trafalgar Road > > Cambridge > > CB4 1DU > > England > > > > Email: [log in to unmask] > > Website: http://people.pwf.cam.ac.uk/elw33/ > > Phone [00 44] (0)1223 350256 > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >> Poets > >> who write > >> in traditional forms > >> based on meter and rhyme > >> chunk their poems > >> but > >> in a different way > >> from graphic syntax, > >> which chunks based on grammatical > >> units. > >> Both, > >> I believe, > >> can make text easier to comprehend. > >> --- On Sat, 12/6/08, Carolyn Hartnett <[log in to unmask]> > wrote: > >> > >> From: Carolyn Hartnett <[log in to unmask]> > >> Subject: Graphic Syntax > >> To: [log in to unmask] > >> Date: Saturday, December 6, 2008, 9:51 AM > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> Isn't the way much poetry is printed somewhat similar to graphic syntax? > >> It makes poems easier to read, I believe. > >> > >> Carolyn Hartnett > >> Professor Emeritus, College of the Mainland > >> 2027 Bay St. > >> Texas City, Texas 77590To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit > the > >> list's web interface at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.htmland > >> select "Join or leave the list" > >> Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web > interface > >> at: > >> http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html > >> and select "Join or leave the list" > >> > >> Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > > > > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web > interface at: > > http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html > > and select "Join or leave the list" > > > > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > > > > > > > > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web > interface at: > > http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html > > and select "Join or leave the list" > > > > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface > at: > http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html > and select "Join or leave the list" > > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > > > > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface > at: > http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html > and select "Join or leave the list" > > Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/ > To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or leave the list" Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/