Scott,
You’ve put your finger squarely on the problem, and it is
one of research design. What you’re asking for is qualitative
research, a body of methods and an approach that is showing up more in
anthropology and other social sciences. Much of the anti-grammar research
makes the quantitative assumption that what’s real is what can be counted
or measured. If it can’t be counted or measured unambiguously, then
it’s not real. It’s an argument I’ve had repeatedly
with my colleagues in psychology. The T-unit is such a measure. It’s
about as subtle as you can get with counting things when it comes to research
on language, part of what spawned my maxim “Anything in language that you
can count doesn’t.” There are sound statistical methods for
determining whether the researcher’s judgment of construction type or of
complexity is reliable, but these measures and methodologies tend not to have
been used much in composition research, at least not in that area of it focused
on grammar and writing. Ironic, considering how composition researchers
have embraced quantitative and ethnographic models in other areas of their
research.
It is also, unfortunately, the case that good qualitative
studies tend to take longer and are harder to get funding for because of that.
And because most graduate faculty in composition and rhetoric have been trained
in the anti-grammar literature, they don’t encourage their doctoral
students to undertake such dissertations.
Herb
From: Assembly for the
Teaching of English Grammar [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Scott
Woods
Sent: 2009-02-11 09:41
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Subject: Sentence composing/grammar to improve writing
Dear List, I have been using using Don Killgallon's Grammar for
Middle School: A Sentence-Composing Approach with my seventh grade
classes. Here's an example of a first sentence from a short story by
one of my students, a native speaker of Arabic and not previously a very good
writer: His face pale, his shirt stained with blood, his pants
tattered, his shoes ripped and dirty, the Roman soldier advanced toward the
castle, stepping over the rotting bodies of the British, every step taking
him closer to the enemy's territory, every step taking him closer to death. Prior to learning to use absolute phrases and
participial phrases (as well as the other modifiers he learned) this student
could not have written such a sentence. He could not even really think
about improving his style. Teaching students to consciously control
sentence structure works, in my experience. Incidentally, students universally
enjoy it. Why don't the studies which measure the effectiveness
of teaching grammar look at the specific constructions and
sentence types taught and the changes in the frequency and effectiveness
of their use? Clause length and other such measures seem clumsy
and not particularly useful as measures of writing skill if we are trying to
improve student writing. Scott Woods |
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