To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or leave the list"On May 20, 2009, at 1:09 PM, Craig Hancock wrote:You can certainly make the judgment that Ed's version shows more flexibility on the part of the writer, but it doesn't make it a better essay,Craig, it's clearly better. You offer no evidence for why it is worse or even equal. Own up, dude: It is clearly better, but, yes, it still sucks. Your tower is showing.The rest of your argument is irrelevant. You are preaching to the choir. We do know what makes a good essay. We know that varying sentence starts is not a panacea.Visit ATEG's web site at http://ateg.org/
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