For tomorrow’s Basic Writing Class, I collected the students’ written responses to the “Round Robin” questions/prompts that Claudia posted: This semester in this class I expect to learn ... When I am writing, I always have problems with ... Some things I want to know about my teacher are ... The reasons that I am taking this course are ... Some grammar points I find daunting are ... Some things which I really value are ... I typed them up and posted as a WORD file on Blackboard that I plan to show to the class on the big screen. Rather than “correct” the anonymous sentences and responses to the prompts, I am going to let the students comment on the clarity and effectiveness of the writing and determine if the passages are sentences, why or why not? I am hoping they will be able to discern between good writing and then writing that is problematic for one reason or another.(ie. missing or misused punctuation, repetitiveness or redundancy in the word choice, errors that impede understanding, and what would they do to improve upon some of the passages?). While we are discussing the writing, I plan to familiarize them with grammatical terms in the course of the discussion, many of which they are surely familiar. I was caught by surprise to see “grammar” used as a verb in two student examples: 1) “This semester in class I expect to learn how to write essays in a correct manor and how to word sentences correctly. I would also like to learn how not to write too much and to make my essays sweet and to the point. I expect to learn how to grammar my sentences correctly also.” 2) “I expect to learn to brainstorm better and the best way to come up with a thesis statement. I also expect to learn how to better grammar my essays.” I would appreciate any other helpful hints and exercises used to present grammar. Thank you to the folks who sent me some ideas off-list! Best- Carol --- On Thu, 9/1/11, Sharon Saylors <[log in to unmask]> wrote: From: Sharon Saylors <[log in to unmask]> Subject: Re: The Domain of Grammar To: [log in to unmask] Date: Thursday, September 1, 2011, 10:45 PM My community college grammar course for English majors and future secondary teachers has Martha Kolln's book Understanding English Grammar as its cornerstone, but also includes a service learning component. My students tutor developmental students for 10 hours of our class time. We start with the concept that everyone is a grammar expert and then move from form and structure classes to diagramming,slotting, rhetorical grammar, and finally end with grammar games. The teachers learn more than the students and solidify their interest in teaching. I also include grammar in my freshman composition courses. Sherry Saylors >>> [log in to unmask] 08/31/11 10:49 PM >>> I am about to embark on a journey of teaching two Comp I classes and one developmental writing course at the community college level. Both classes have "grammar" as a component of the curriculum. The basic writing course has one textbook that includes reading, writing, and grammar. The Comp I classes have separate grammar handbooks and reading texts. I would like to think that "grammar" connects many entities that fall under the language umbrella: reading, writing, oral and written communication, comprehension and understanding. It is my goal not to present grammar as a separate entity or set of rules, but as a natural part of everyday communication. I particularly like this passage written by Dick Veit: "I am now a volunteer teaching an 'intermediate ESL grammar class' that includes not only syntax but also pronunciation, pragmatics, semantics, punctuation, vocabulary, language etiquette, cultural differences, job-interview skills, and even (last week) hurricane preparation. On the most practical level the domain of grammar is determined by what the students in front of us would most benefit from knowing." Friday in class we will be doing a basic grammar review for my Comp I classes, just to gauge their familiarity with some basic grammar terminology: subject, verb, noun, sentence, tense, adjective, adverb, phrase, clause. How will this help their writing? How will it help them become more adept at using language? I am interested in finding out what will help my students the most with their writing and daily communicating and tailoring some classes that can integrate many things that fall under the whole language umbrella to learn grammar. Carol Morrison --- On Wed, 8/31/11, Dick Veit <[log in to unmask]> wrote: From: Dick Veit <[log in to unmask]> Subject: Re: The Domain of Grammar To: [log in to unmask] Date: Wednesday, August 31, 2011, 5:37 PM Asking about the domain of grammar is worthwhile, but it's a question without a definitive answer. Everyone from the ivory-tower linguist to the average schlub on the street would agree that it includes the study of nouns and verbs, but as we move away from that core, the boundaries become a matter for private stipulative definition. This is akin to a discussion I just had about "the Great American Songbook." Everyone agrees that it includes the work of the Gerschwins, Kern, Arlen, Mercer, and the other Tin Pan Alley greats. But the edges are fuzzy. Is there a beginning and an end? Can we include Stephen Foster? How about Billy Joel? Again, many strong opinions but no definitive answers. Apart from the core we agree on, everyone is free to stipulate their own definition. As we've seen, a discussion of grammar's domain can be quite theoretical (and astonishingly intemperate!). It can also be conducted on a purely practical level. In a high school "grammar" class, should we introduce questions of punctuation? How about phonology? I just retired after many years teaching a "college-level advanced grammar course" that was focused almost exclusively on syntax. I am now a volunteer teaching an "intermediate ESL grammar class" that includes not only syntax but also pronunciation, pragmatics, semantics, punctuation, vocabulary, language etiquette, cultural differences, job-interview skills, and even (last week) hurricane preparation. On the most practical level the domain of grammar is determined by what the students in front of us would most benefit from knowing. I am interested in hearing more about theory. I'd also like to hear what school teachers and college faculty include in their own "grammar" courses. Dick On Wed, Aug 31, 2011 at 3:52 PM, Spruiell, William C <[log in to unmask]> wrote: John, Maybe a terminological split would be handy here. On the one hand, there's "the material about language we want to teach." On the other, there's "grammar." Because linguists have used the word "grammar" for so long in rather specific ways, linguists won't tend to think of phonology as grammar (although there certainly are positions that don't view the distinction as ironclad). As Craig has pointed out, a lot of the public is accustomed to thinking of "grammar" as "the stuff we're supposed to say in a different way, because the way we say it is Wrong" Neither the public nor (most) linguists would typically think of including a unit on deceptive advertising language in the category of "grammar," but I certainly think that kind of thing should be in all English curricula, and I suspect most, if not all, people on this list would agree. What would be the effect if, instead of "grammar," we think of the area as simply "language analysis"? Those linguists who firmly believe that "grammar" should refer only to morphosyntax, conceptualized as a separate component, probably won't object to "language analysis" being defined much more broadly, and certainly neither would functionalists; in effect, no one's staked out a claim on "language analysis." [1] Yes, it's vague -- and there would be a danger of someone thinking that talking about literary metaphors for ten minutes constitutes a language analysis unit -- but it's certainly as delimited as "social studies" or some of the other mainstays of public education. I used to like the label "language structure awareness" for this, but I've come to think that that doesn't sufficiently foreground analytic reasoning. --- Bill Spruiell [1] Note -- please! -- that I'm not saying here that restricting "grammar" to morphosyntax is either a good or bad position, nor (more particularly) am I suggesting that that position is Bob's. It *is* the position of a number of linguists, but both they and linguists that firmly disagree with them (like me) would largely agree that a wide range of language phenomena should be discussed in English classrooms. To a certain extent, it's the terminology that's the hang-up, and that's partly because the terms have become rallying flags in position wars. I'd be happy to call the entire area something totally new, like Theeb or Floortst, if I thought people would go along with it. In fact, letting a classroom full of students decide what new term *they* want to call it would be a great opening activity for a unit on it. On Aug 30, 2011, at 11:00 AM, John Dews-Alexander wrote: Picking up on a point made by Paul, I want to ask the question, "What is the domain of grammar? What does grammar encompass? What does it NOT encompass? What aspects of grammar should/should not be incorporated into the language arts curriculum?" (I am referring to only the grammar of English.) If we talk about language sounds (phonetics) and how we use them (phonology), are we talking about grammar? Do we need to concern ourselves in the classroom with breaking language down into it's basic units of meaning (morphology) to examine the construction of words? Are the rules for forming phrases, clauses, and sentences (syntax) the Sovereign of Grammar and how far do we take the teaching of these "rules"? Do we go beyond this level? Do we consider larger units of language (discourse) and its aspects of cohesion, coherence, clarity, information structuring? What about all of the context that informs our understanding of language (pragmatics) -- is that grammar? Do we even consider including stress, rhythm, and intonation (prosody) even if they have a huge impact on meaning? What supports the teaching of grammar? Is it valuable/worth while to look at the history that informs/shapes the grammar (historical linguistics)? Is a unit on animal communication worthwhile in order to emphasize what makes human language/grammar so special? Where do we even start with all of the social/cultural implications of grammar (dialectology/sociolinguistics/anthropology/sociology)? Would we be doing a major disservice by failing to team up with our neighboring science teachers to discuss the cognitive/neural basis of grammar (cognitive/neurolinguistics) -- what we know about grammar and the brain/cognition is fascinating, but is it a part of grammar to English teachers? We must teach literature as well, but do we bring grammar along to analyze these canonized writings? (stylistics/text analysis) It's a big question, I know, and certainly one addressed before, but the composition of this list has changed quite a bit, and I think that it is a discussion worth revisiting for the benefit of all members. Of course, reality precludes us from using an ideal definition of grammar in many cases, but I'm more interested in what that ideal would look like to begin with. I know this also brings into question the relationship between the English/Language Arts teacher and the linguist (or the role of those with a foot in both camps), but I'd like to believe that we all agree by now that no harm comes from a sharing, amicable relationship at a minimum. I look forward to hearing what everyone thinks! 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