It’s one of the incorrect parts. There’s also a comma missing toward the end of the sentence. It should separate the parenthetical comment—waiting for his daughter—from the floor. As it is currently written, the punctuation implies that it is the floor waiting for his daughter. While it is true that many fathers have been floored, no floors have been fathered.
And then there is the issue of style.
John, couldn’t agree with you more about the pseudo-academic nature of this.
Would sentence #4 be correct if “It’s” were chosen? What about the missing commas to separate the three items in the list?
Richard
From: Assembly for the Teaching of English Grammar [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Carlton, Rebecca
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I had the same thought. At first, I thought the comma after “worried” was the incorrect part.
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That was precisely what I thought, too--either his nerves were frayed or, possibly, his appearance--hair mussed, clothes wrinkled--just a vague picture in my mind!
Helene
Date: Tue, 14 Aug 2012 10:20:15 -0400
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Just to jump on the band wagon…
I rather like
5. Worried, and frayed, the old man paced the floor waiting for his daughter.
My automatic reading was that the old man’s nerves were frayed… Shows my age, I suppose, as this is also likely something that no young person would ever think or write!
Best,
D
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Good points on the questions, which are also vaguely worded and hard to understand. They are also sentences that no young person would ever think or write!
Melinda Borrell
Adjunct Professor of Communication, UMUC
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I was reading an article in the NCLE SmartBrief about research that purported to establish a link between texting and grammar skills. The researchers concluded that the more students text, the weaker their grammar skills are. A link in the article took me to an article in the L.A. Times with more details, including this little gem, and I quote:
The researchers had kids from ages 10 to 14 take a little grammar test. And it turned out that those who sent or received texts recently performed worse on the exam. Here's a sample of the questions, so you can test yourself -- or your kids -- to see how the text saturation has affected your grammar.
1. During the flood, we (dranked, drank, drunk, drunked) bottled water.
2. Fortunately, Jim’s name was (accepted, excepted) from the roster of those who
would have to clean bathrooms because he was supposed to go downtown to
(accept, except) a reward for the German Club.
3. I don’t know how I could (lose, loose) such a big dress. It is so large that it is
(lose, loose) on me when I wear it!
4. (Its, It’s, Its’) an honor to accept the awards certificates and medals presented to
the club.
5. Worried, and frayed, the old man paced the floor waiting for his daughter.
(Correct/Incorrect)
The answers: 1. drank; 2. excepted, accept; 3. lose, loose; 4. It's; 5. incorrect (it should be "afraid").
(Source: http://www.latimes.com/business/technology/la-fi-tn-texting-ruining-kids-grammar-skills-20120801,0,1365582.story)
Really?! Three out of the five sample questions have nothing to do with grammar--they are spelling issues. Furthermore, as any basic course in statistics will emphasize, one cannot infer causality from correlations. If this is the kind of research that is informing our educators, God help us!
John
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