Linda Di Desidero, PhD
Director, Leadership Communication Skills Center
Marine Corps University
Gray Research Center, Room 122
Quantico, Virginia 22134
Right you are, Bruce. I was just reading about Henry Clay and jumped to conclusions.Frick may have been America's most hated man, but I always had kind thoughts when visiting his mansion and art collection in NYC.
DickTo join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or leave the list"On Wed, Dec 25, 2013 at 11:47 AM, Bruce Despain <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
Dick & John,Henry Clay Frick, the industrialist, was indeed born in 1849 (December 19).Am I right to assume that the awkward noun phrase is a sentence fragment, apparently the title of an illustration or picture?The reference to "this day," however, makes me think maybe not.The adjective phrase (participle) modifying man, which is a part of the quotative phrase (itself another fragment), is not really a very smooth style. I think I would want to rewrite it:
The stunning mansion of 'the most hated man in America' (who was born on this day in 1849).
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Subject: Re: modifier placement
Date: Wed, 25 Dec 2013 11:23:47 -0500DickBest holiday wishes.Both are grammatical, but grammaticality counts for little if the result is ambiguous and unclear. The result here is actually worse than ambiguous. Because "born" is generally used with people and not buildings, most readers are likely to assume the second reading, i.e., that Clay was born in 1849. Since this is not true (he was born in 1777), the writer has done a poor job indeed. If he had used "built" instead of "born," the problem would have been less likely to have arisen.There are two possible interpretations:1) ...mansion [...man] [born...], where both phrases are modifiers of "mansion"2) ...mansion [ [...man] [born...] ], where the first phrase modifies "mansion" and the second modifies [man]
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On Wed, Dec 25, 2013 at 7:34 AM, John Chorazy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
To join or leave this LISTSERV list, please visit the list's web interface at: http://listserv.muohio.edu/archives/ateg.html and select "Join or leave the list"Happy Holidays to all...I can infer that the intent of the phrase below suggests that "the most hated man in America" (referring to Henry Clay Frick) was born "on this day" etc. But can I defend in grammatical terms that this is a misplaced modifier suggesting that the mansion was born on this day? Thank you and best wishes...The stunning mansion of 'the most hated man in America,' born on this day in 1849.
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