Vagaries... "two or more independent clauses in the sentence that need a
period or semicolon," highlighting "remembering so". I agree that the
sentence is formed just fine.​.. just a missing comma before "so" which
still doesn't make a run-on.

On Fri, Dec 5, 2014 at 9:31 PM, Dick Veit <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

> Even if it were a run-on, it's a *poem! . . . *But all parts seem fully
> formed and properly connected. What are the specifics of the claim?
>
>
>
> On Fri, Dec 5, 2014 at 8:11 PM, John Chorazy <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
>> I've recently seen this sentence in a poem called a run-on and would
>> dispute that claim. Any thoughts on a parsing would be appreciated.
>>
>> "There was a dream I had and want to keep remembering so / I write the
>> image down, mindful that years from now nothing / will remain of it except
>> this ink, and barely that."
>>
>> Thank you... enjoy the weekend.
>>
>>
>> --
>> John Chorazy
>> English III Honors, AP Lit
>> Advisor, *Panther Press*
>> Pequannock Township High School
>> 973.616.6000
>>
>>
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