Could someone with more practice/experiencing with sentence diagramming please help me out with this?

And so instead of revising our writing to meet their needs, we send it off the moment it meets ours. (from Joseph Williams and Joseph Bizup's Style, Lessons in Clarity and Grace). 


Many thanks,


Richard

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