Hi, Mike! >Grammarians: Please correct this, in lieu of current grammar rules. 1. "in lieu of" means "in place of." You mean "according to." >I am writing you in regards to your stationary notebooks sold at many of your CVS Pharmacy Stores. 2. "in regards to" has several problems; "about" will suffice. "stationary" means sitting still; "stationery" is what you want. >A few months ago, I noticed a change in type of material used on the front cover. 3. "in type of" should be "in the type of;" however, "in the material will suffice. "on the front cover" would be better as "for the front cover." >I have found some of the older type notebooks 4. "the older type" is inelegant; "the older" will suffice. >This will meet 5. "This" is vague, as well as singular; "They will meet" is better. >I hope you will consider my comments for future reference. 6. "I hope . . . etc." is vague and requires no outcome. "Please inform me about your plans for the notebook covers." ========================================================== Paul T. Wilson (616) 387-3494 Assoc Prof of Reading [log in to unmask] Western Michigan University or [log in to unmask] Once I thought I was wrong, But I was mistaken. ==========================================================