Hi--I had emailed you earlier about presenting a short, "working" draft on what exactly constitutes well crafted sentences (I don't particularly like the terms fluency/maturity).  I will be presenting in the ATEG part about stylesheets (how students can assess/evaluate the craftsmanship of their writing and /or that of their favorite writers).  For the PubGram, I thought of presenting the underlying concepts of craft--both syntactically (subordination and consolidation) but also stylistically (fronting, for example).
Please let me know if you'd like me to do that
Cornelia

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