Sounds good to me.
Margaret Luongo
Associate Chair for Undergraduate Studies
Associate Professor, Creative Writing
Miami University
Department of English
356 Bachelor Hall
Oxford, OH 45056
(513) 529-3237
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I don't like the practical criticism set as currently framed. Some of the
outcomes seem a little redundant maybe. C has no real content as a writing
outcome--it's about going to readings and writing them up, without details
about the writing outcomes expected. There is also an argument about
intentionality that has been smuggled into this that worries me a little.
The language of "mastery" also bugs me. I propose as an alternative
something like this, which I am cobbling together quickly between meetings:
a. Demonstration of advanced close reading skills in
description and analysis of published work and peers' texts, with regard to
elements of craft (e.g. point of view, pacing, imagery, syntax)
b. Demonstration of advanced close reading skills in description
and analysis of published work and peers' texts, with regard to the
aesthetics of the work or performance (the architecture of the whole) and
conventions of genre (including hybrid genres)
c. Demonstration of ability to offer constructive practical
editorial assistance concerning the compositions of peers
On 3/29/11 9:44 AM, "luongomm-muohio.edu" <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Hi, Eric and all--
>
> Under Practical Criticism (b), I'm a little uncomfortable with "psychologies."
> I think "philosophies and purposes" are both defensible and accurate. I fixed
> a typo and changed 50-60 graduates to 50-70. That's probably closer to
> correct. Attached document shows changes in Track Changes.
>
> --Margaret
>
>
> Margaret Luongo
> Associate Chair for Undergraduate Studies
> Associate Professor, Creative Writing
> Miami University
> Department of English
> 356 Bachelor Hall
> Oxford, OH 45056
> (513) 529-3237
> [log in to unmask]
> ________________________________________
> From: Miami University Creative Writing Faculty [[log in to unmask]]
> On Behalf Of Goodman, Eric [[log in to unmask]]
> Sent: Monday, March 28, 2011 5:51 PM
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Competency and Assessment Document
>
> Dear Writers,
>
> Herešs the beast. Comments?
>
> EKG
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