I know John said to contact him off the list to continue this discussion, but I thought this would be better continued on the list, unless you all object. One point that John brings up in Item #2 below is that the test asks students to read the sentences out loud. Generaly, this is not a bad idea -- I'm sure that I'm not the only teacher who recommends that the students read their writing aloud; however, this is NOT a good way to check for punctuation as several of the test prep models recommend.
If I had a dime for each time I reminded my students that punctuation exists more for the eye than the ear, .......... !
Students make so many errors with commas, many because they think that a comma should be placed wherever you take a pause or a breath, that bad information like that supplied in the CAHSEE test-prep booklet is counterproductive.
California, by the way, is notorious for these klinds of errors (no offense to any of you California teachers -- I'm sure you did not write the standards, these tests, this bad legislation, or the test-prep booklet). Has anyone out there read Susan Ohanian's little book, _One Size Fits Few_? It has a chapter on the California standards that she titles, "Californication." It's a fascinating book.
Keep fighting to save education and our students from the bureaucrats!
Paul
"Crow, John T" <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
Hi Len,
Paul's well-stated message speaks to this type of testing in general. In defense of the CAHSEE, it requires that students write an essay, so it isn't purely a collection of decontextualized sentences. However, the approach to the teaching of grammar inherent in these types of questions, combined with the misinformation that they contain raised my hackles:
Item #1: The Alaskan rivers are clear and sparkling in summer however; they are frozen in winter.
Solution: This is a run-on sentence No it isn't. two sentences run together without punctuation I guess the semi-colon doesn't count as punctuation. between them and needs to be fixed. "However" is a conjunction No it isn't. that needs to be set off by commas Not always. In fact, it won't be set off by commas when corrected. It would be possible to put in a period and a capital H on however. But that is not one of the choices. You dont join two complete thoughts that are equally important Importance relative to each other isn't an issue. Neither is "two complete thoughts." with commas or colons. You can most certainly join "two complete thoughts" with a colon EX: I go to Alaska every year for one reason: I love to fish for salmon.
Item #2:
The frightened pilot's face was ashen as he gingerly lowered the plane onto the Smiths' private __________ that time was running out for his ailing friend.
A. runway: he knew
B. runway, he knew
C. runway. He knew
D. runway but he knew
There are two perfectly acceptable answers here: A and C. I can also construe a very reasonable context that would make D acceptable.
Solutions: Read this one out loud, inserting the missing words. Reading out loud won't help at all. In spoken English, there is no difference between sentence boundaries and clausal boundaries, so students won't "hear" anything wrong with any of the resulting sentences. How many sentences do you have? Do you have one complete thought or two complete thoughts? Here we go with "complete thoughts" again. This is a very squishy concept--I can count several "complete thoughts" here. How do you end a sentence? How do you begin a new sentence? You know this, dont you? Only one of these answers includes a period and a capital letter.
This post is already long enough, so I will end here. Contact me off the listserv if you want to continue this discussion--I could go on and on . . . .
John
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Subject: Re: CAHSEE
Could you please explain to me further what is wrong with the questions? I think I am missing something. This is the kind of question (with a slight variation in the format) that my students frequently face on the BC Provincial Exams.
Len Wyatt
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Sent: August 17, 2004 2:12 PM
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Subject: CAHSEE
California has passed a law requiring high school students pass a standardized exam in order to graduate--the CAlifornia High School Exit Exam (CAHSEE). Here are two seriously flawed sample questions from the study guide for the so-called Writing Conventions Strand (http://www.cde.ca.gov/ta/tg/hs/elaguide.asp). Need I say more??
John
Released CAHSEE question
The Alaskan rivers are clear and sparkling in summer however; they are frozen in winter.
A. in summer, however they are frozen in winter.
B. in summer; however, they are frozen in winter.
C. in summer: however they are frozen in winter.
D. Leave as is.
Solution
This is a run-on sentencetwo sentences run together without punctuation between themand needs to be fixed. "However" is a conjunction that needs to be set off by commas. It would be possible to put in a period and a capital H on however. But that is not one of the choices. You dont join two complete thoughts that are equally important with commas or colons. The preceding sentence joins two complete thoughts that could be separated into two sentences. What punctuation mark joins the two thoughts into one sentence? A semicolon joins them. The correct answer is B. (WC 10.1.1)
Released CAHSEE question
The frightened pilot's face was ashen as he gingerly lowered the plane onto the Smiths' private __________ that time was running out for his ailing friend.
A. runway: he knew
B. runway, he knew
C. runway. He knew
D. runway but he knew
Solution
Read this one out loud, inserting the missing words. How many sentences do you have? Do you have one complete thought or two complete thoughts? How do you end a sentence? How do you begin a new sentence? You know this, dont you? Only one of these answers includes a period and a capital letter. The correct answer is C. (WC 10.1.1)
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